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Summer Grind Senryu

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Summer Grind Senryu

summer cruise
we park in the side road
and backseat grind

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  1. Date: 3/17/2010 5:21:00 AM
    Effective imagery in this senryu, Hai Au. What about the zoo or a museum...I know, the library! Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 2/13/2010 1:55:00 PM
    Ouuuuulaalalaaaa... Perhaps you'd like my Up Periscope? I love all thats' not said!

  1. Date: 7/5/2009 9:56:00 AM
    You put the fire under the soup, and warmed it up!! Congratulations on being among the Hot Poems this week!! Great job!! :)

  1. Date: 7/5/2009 8:03:00 AM
    Straight and to the point, I can imagine that very well very passionate.... Great write! Thanks for the comment!

  1. Date: 7/3/2009 2:42:00 PM
    Love it, great write !

  1. Date: 7/2/2009 7:52:00 PM
    Well welcome to PoetrySoup Hai !! As you probably already know (but may have forgot ... smile) this is really a Senryu form as the Haiku is left for thoughts of nature and the Senryu is used for human behavior. And who hasn't participated in this ... LOL ... anyway, sorry if my school teacher is coming out and thanks so much for your comment on my writing! It was much appreciated.

  1. Date: 7/2/2009 5:09:00 PM
    Interesting Haiku. Sara

  1. Date: 7/2/2009 2:10:00 PM
    cheeky! good write.

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 3:42:00 AM
    seems like she's already touched you. just her dancing is inconsistent. and she doesn't much listen to me.

  1. Date: 6/30/2009 2:38:00 PM
    Excellent write Hai>>James

  1. Date: 6/30/2009 9:21:00 AM
    Too much in my imagination, Hai Au! Lovely, pure passion(in my mind) in this writing. Great job, my friend. Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/30/2009 9:13:00 AM
    Pretty poem - but I think ist is a senryu because it is not about nature. Sounds like agreat experience. Yours Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/29/2009 7:51:00 PM
    Hello Hai, I liked your answer or comment to Kareena. About hearing in black and white. That was very clever as well! Check your syllable count in line two, I believe it has eight. Just take out I and it's perfect! Is that what they mean when they say moons over Miami?:))-AA

  1. Date: 6/29/2009 7:15:00 PM
    What a beautiful feeling you have shown in this lovely haiku. Congrats! -Alley

  1. Date: 6/29/2009 6:55:00 PM
    Loving in the back seat down a country road, Oh! how this piece just takes me home! Loved it!

  1. Date: 6/29/2009 4:20:00 PM
    haha turning the lights off the shower makes it all lok more romantic. cuz u use the moonlight in the window. gotta try it to see what im talking about. thanks for the comments.

  1. Date: 6/29/2009 4:00:00 PM
    sounds like fun! Hai! nice write! and thanks for comments!!! and WELCOME to the 'sizzlin' soup~

  1. Date: 6/29/2009 3:53:00 PM
    i never really understand what haiku's is about. but it seems as though this one is good, because everybody else likes it. so i like it too. (:

  1. Date: 6/29/2009 11:41:00 AM
    Welcome to PoetrySoup Hai Au Chu. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/29/2009 11:11:00 AM
    Courageous write, my friend, I applaud for you to do it again. One love