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Summer Burn

Grass burned crisp, sun kills
   Summer's throat parched and arid-
      Clouds threaten to burst!

A. Green
* Thankful the rain has finally come
to feed the green again.

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  1. Date: 3/27/2011 5:11:00 PM
    Reminds me of the threatening rain clouds drifting over the Southern Pass of El Paso, so full of rain, but just drifts on by guess to Oklahoma or kansas. Nice haiku.

  1. Date: 11/24/2010 12:10:00 PM
    HI, Amy, where are you anyway? Hope you have heard of your win in the big soup contest by now! Luv,andrea

  1. Date: 7/30/2010 3:29:00 AM
    A wonderful Haiku Amy..I love the second line.. I truly hope things are fine where you are. I haven't heard from you ever since your last soupmail. Take care

  1. Date: 7/27/2010 12:13:00 PM
    We are getting much needed rain now too but in torrential streams... then it stops and the Sun comes out again.. your Haiku is perfect for the weather report today.. enjoyed.. SOUP MAIL in a few.. with luv..

  1. Date: 7/27/2010 3:29:00 AM
    A nice welcome to the summer after all.

  1. Date: 7/26/2010 11:36:00 PM
    cool write!!! soupmail Amy

  1. Date: 7/26/2010 10:43:00 PM
    Great Haiku Amy......Larry

  1. Date: 7/26/2010 9:19:00 PM
    nice one Amy