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Sultry Goodbyes

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Sultry Goodbyes

Late August and the hot air drifts over the lake the sky glowers striking a contrast black to gray soon, very soon, the lake with be thundered awake and the heat mirage with dissolve in disarray. The last of children's giggles will echo ghostly through the woods at water's edge mixed with sparrow song. Pink skinned lovers chilled will be but a memory and their cuddling brought indoors where it belongs The garden's done, each tomato plant has yielded scorched by the heat, fields and forest long for Autumn, praise the heat of summer for it raised the corn fields, raise a glass from the yield of the apple and the plum. Say goodbye to August with a gentle kiss on the breeze for the wild geese are flying, flying through the changing trees.

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  1. Date: 5/6/2014 9:22:00 PM
    Debbie This is a very nice tribute to summers end. The imagery and description that you created pulls me in and takes me on this journey. Thank you for the sweet comment on my Shakespeare poem.

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:08:00 PM
    Nice win............... DG...................SKAT

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 11:49:00 AM
    congrats.. DG... xox..PD

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 6:14:00 PM
    Congratulations Debbie. I liked your poem. Hate to see fall going so fast because we know how long winter lasts. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 7:57:00 AM
    beautiful write...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 4:29:00 PM
    Debbie...I like how the words flow from one line to the other with your use of punctuation....BEAUTIFUL! I saw the images in my head! :) I'm hopeless at Sonnets! Why not sponsor a competition on this? XOXOXO

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:11:00 PM
    you are getting so good at sonnets, Deb. think how far we both have come since 2010 when we met each other! btw, why didn't you do an acrostic for me? I am sure you would have done well in it!

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:48:00 AM
    Ah! You have captured summer's end so beautifully. Lainie PS, I met my daughter in BC in July.Words can never convey the experience.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 7:39:00 PM
    This is how I often feel the first time I see a yellow school bus arrive, after a lovely summer season. Melancholy and rather sad........sad and lovely all mixed with strange emotion. Nicely done!