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Suicide Wonders

I walk
Dead or Alive
I may look
Alive on the outside
But on the inside
Im dead
Some can see
Past the mask I put on
To cover up
My true emotions
But do they say
Anything to anyone
Of course not
They want me dead
As much as I want
Myself to be dead
And that
Is truly a lot
I know
People do not
Want me around
And Im fine with that
I get it
So just think
When you hear
That someone in
Your school
Has commited suicide
If you were
A reason why
They commited suicide
And if you know
That do didnt
Think again
Because you
Could have done something
To help
Save that life

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  1. Date: 11/22/2009 1:31:00 PM
    very well written, if you know someone who commited suicide, you wonder all these things. keep writing ------Ell

  1. Date: 11/16/2009 5:26:00 PM
    some of us are closer than anyone knows!

  1. Date: 11/16/2009 4:10:00 PM
    Most people that are close to sucide are very good at concealing the fact. Nice write to remind us that someone close to us could be that close. Keep writing. Sara