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Below is the poem entitled Suffocation which was written by poet Veronica Ortiz. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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These wall closing in on me.
These people ganging up on me.
It tends to not let me breathe.
It tends to let me die.
Yes opinions mean very little to me.
But when not anyone can let me be.
When no anyone can let me see,
the brighter side of life.
I'm suffocating in this deadly room!
Theres no oxygen no air!!
I see a light small and bright.
What can it be?
Could it be?
I hope it is.
The light that can take me out of this misery!
The light that can take me away!
It's fading and I die the room darkens again.....

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  1. Date: 12/9/2008 7:11:00 PM
    Left speechless...