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How has it all of sudden 
  gotten to this point?
To the point where 
  you somehow started to care
    about me
      and how I feel?

When you don't really know me.
  So why are you in my head?
And why did you have to ask, 
  if you did anything wrong?
Was it just another line?
  Or am I just another chance
     for you to maybe score?
Not sure if I could give you anymore.

I would rather it just be this.
So it'll be something 
    I'll never miss,
       but somehow 
          I already do.
I'm already missing you.
And the worst part of all this
          whether I'm being missed.

How has it all of sudden 
  gotten to this point?
To the point where 
  I somehow started to care
     about you, 
         and how you feel?

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  1. Date: 2/25/2010 4:13:00 PM
    who you are must reflect in your poetry. missing someone gets deeper each day when they aren't with you. i hope you find something great at the end. -Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 2/25/2010 10:36:00 AM
    What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your poetry today daBomb. Love, Carol