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Such Chaos April 13 2010

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Such Chaos April 13 2010

Surrounded by the chaos,
and slowly drowning in fear.
Suffocating one breath at a time, I'm screaming,
can't anyone hear.

I'm spinning around in circles,
loosing sight of what is real.
Confused to a point where I can't find my way back,
I'm ready to make a deal.

Blank faces and empty stares, 
no emotions left inside.
Standing all alone once again,
in who do I confide.

The craziness takes over me,
swallowing me as a whole.
Swimming in a pool of darkness,
I have lost all control.

Giving up and giving in,
to the demon in my head.
A never ending battle I face,
that will haunt me till I'm dead

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  1. Date: 2/18/2011 4:22:00 PM
    This is a really good poem, the rhyming is very good and very nice descriptions! it reminds me of some poems i have written!