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Submitting To Comfort Zone

Shying away from His light - I don't understand I hop into shell!

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Samantha Edwards

Date: 8/25/2014 7:28:00 AM

On the surface, I see a bug running from someone's flashlight at night. What makes this special is that it has layers. I enjoy finding those layers. Your poem is well-written and doesn't need the title to point the reader in that direction (although that is just my personal opinion). I like the statement you are making about people fearing religious enlightenment and staying in the dark by choice, because it's comfortable. I could say more, but I'm running out of characters. Thanks for sharing!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/11/2013 8:13:00 AM

Sounds like an oyster. There must be a pearl in there. Are you saying meditation and rest are very important? I think so. Sometimes just allowing one's brain to rest let's a lot of very important work be done. Things can happen even while you are asleep. Just take it all in!