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Darkness beneath, The torn and tattered sheets You lie awake, And feel the walls shake As again this year, Christmas ends in tears And with all the gifts, Your life just shifts Cuz Dad's job kills, And Mommy can't pay the bills So you just lay and weap Cuz you just can't sleep But you swear, You'll one day make it out of there.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/31/2008 3:08:00 AM
awe- hope ful great rhyme-keep writing!
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Date: 12/21/2008 2:59:00 AM
Life is definalty very hard, if I can make it out, anyone can. :) Great poem filled with truth. love, Kristin
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Date: 12/20/2008 9:16:00 PM
Powerful piece with a reality true for far too many. Though the holidays are a joy for many, others suffer losses that loom bigger at this time of year. Good use of rhyme. The informal style works well to convey the message. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poetry. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 12/20/2008 7:23:00 PM
hard times we face. thanks for the comment Barbara
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