Streams In the Desert

This misty river, scented sweet From bare land you enthrall, To quench the evening's sultry heat Beside your cooling wall. Low tide lends splendor to this rite To twirl upon the dew Then lacquers every ledge with white; And powdered shades of blue. Tanned cacti swoon to windy breeze Quite mellow to the ear, And harmony's drooled chant can seize This desert atmosphere. . ............ . . Short Form Contest; Brian Strand 8/6/8/6 syl count--rhyme
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 4/17/2017 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette. Desert rivers are special, and you paint a beautiful image.
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Date: 4/17/2017 9:34:00 AM
Amazing, really feels refreshing:) a 7:)congratulations on top win with this beauty, Nette:)
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Date: 12/30/2013 6:54:00 PM
Really beautiful in content and flowing like a stream. Congratulations on your well deserved winning place. Hugs SuZ
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Date: 12/19/2013 5:24:00 AM
so lovely
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Date: 12/16/2013 4:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your top spot, I can think of no other person more worthy of nature's crown!
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Date: 12/15/2013 9:25:00 PM
An ehereal piece. I recently moved from Arizona and this brings back memories of the beauty of the desert.
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Date: 12/15/2013 12:49:00 PM
A wonderful win Nette, Just keep on writing these winners....Hugs...Roger
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Date: 12/14/2013 8:17:00 PM
Elegant write, Nette. Congrats!
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Date: 12/14/2013 3:21:00 PM
Excellent and Beautiful write...Congrats on your superb win,great poet...
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Date: 12/14/2013 12:56:00 PM
Wow!! BIG CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win friend Nette..two thumbs up for you. you're such a great poet..walang halong biro..Cheers!!!!!!!!! ;)
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Date: 12/14/2013 5:46:00 AM
Excellent poem as always my very dear friend Nette! My biggest hearty congratulations on your well-deserved super win! Biggest hugs to u! Hope you're doing well always! Advance Merry Christmas now. love lots, Leonora
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Date: 12/13/2013 11:44:00 PM
Nette, a wonderful win...xox..Linda
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Date: 12/13/2013 11:18:00 AM
Lovely Nette.. congrats again. BG
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Date: 12/13/2013 11:02:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Congrats on your win, really excellent.
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Date: 12/13/2013 9:48:00 AM
wow Nette fantastic well deserved win congrats Shadow x smile hugs
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Date: 12/13/2013 8:38:00 AM
nette congratulations.awesome poem.Thanks for the support rendered.(: ) Jenish.
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Date: 12/13/2013 8:16:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem nature, Congrats, Nette
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Date: 5/19/2013 8:51:00 PM
Simply amazing. Every word magnificently weaved together to make it sparkle. Loved being in your desert for a few moments. going in my favs
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Date: 5/2/2013 3:13:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your well-deserved super win my dear friend Nette! I enjoyed so much reading this stellar write of yours! Thanks a lot for the inspiring comments on my poem. I'm in Ilocos now. Talk to you soon. Big hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 5/1/2013 6:44:00 PM
NETTE, :-) I love the sound of "Enlightenment, Hope, and Harmony." Congratulations in Russell's contest. ~LINDA
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Date: 5/1/2013 6:01:00 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win, Nette!
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Date: 5/1/2013 5:53:00 AM
Many many congratulations Nette love xx
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Date: 4/30/2013 11:21:00 PM
Dear Nette, Yours is a favorite and so beautifully written. I can surely see why it is in first place. I love this poem! Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 4/30/2013 7:17:00 PM
This is truly beautiful nette. It is nice to have you back with us. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/30/2013 4:19:00 PM
Awesome and lovely piece,Nette...Congrats on your superb win in this contest..Welcome back great poet and friend...Missed you ,greatly...XOXO...
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