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Strangers In Paradise

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Strangers In Paradise

Strangers In Paradise 
You Standing there

Blonde wavy hair
Streaks of red and gold

Eyes so  piercing 
Look right through me

And yet, then again
I see you watching me

I feel awkward this moment 
As you look right through me

I feel it every move I make
Even though you're not aware

I feel as though you're touching me
As my day dreams take me to paradise 

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  1. Date: 1/7/2015 4:29:00 PM
    Soulful eyes eyes that speak without a word,, thoughts exposed, though not unheard, passion flares behind these gates soul connectin gesticulates, hypnotic eyes aint absurd... Don re: Dbbie Duncan "Strangers In Paradise"

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 3:26:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it to read..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are valuable to me..Sara

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 3:02:00 PM
    mind has the picture, daydream takes you there, in part of the astral, transported you share.

  1. Date: 1/3/2012 3:53:00 PM
    Oh! to be a stranger in paradise. It's like window shopping, and not being able to buy, but to just dream. <*> Soup Mail for you <*> Thank you for your kind words on my poem "On Golden Sands" much appreciated :) James

  1. Date: 12/23/2011 11:28:00 AM
    Smile ˜ Yessss, sometimes when the stars aligned, just right, you can feel love swimming through your soul * Dreams like paradise, and further you go * Merry Christmas, Beautiful Debbie * My love always, John!:) ˜

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 12/23/2011 1:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you John for reading my poetry ;} Merry Christmas to you and yours as well ;}
  1. Date: 10/5/2011 8:33:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Debbie. Love, Carol

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 12/10/2011 3:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much Carol ;} blessings to you and yours !