Storm

whipping winds pelting rain and dead leaves flying all foretell a storm

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Matthew Anish

Date: 12/8/2010 11:58:00 AM

I remeber some terrible storms in New York(which iws where I live). I liked your poem - it offers a vivid description of an oncoming torrent. Best of the Season to you and yours! Matthew Anish

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 11/30/2010 4:43:00 PM

And we have a whopper coming later tonight! That about describes it! No, Audrey, You are great! I have gone back to college and my father has the first stages of senility, so I am at premium for time thes last few weeks. I'll try and catch up with everyone in a few days. You're great! Love, Gerard.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/30/2010 8:46:00 AM

could definitely feel that storm brewing, Audrey! powerful monoku :) hugs--nikko

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/27/2010 9:46:00 AM

Lovely monoku Audrey.. Awesome forecast of a coming storm, love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/27/2010 8:55:00 AM

A very vivid description. It could be one of nature's storms or one of the personal crises that affect our lives. Excellent monoku, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/27/2010 6:13:00 AM

We experienced these words recently.. very vivid and so visual Audrey my friend.. storms are quite fascinating as are your wonderful words luv.. happy weekend..thankxxx for all your prayers too..

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