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Stopping By Accident

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Below is the poem entitled Stopping By Accident which was written by poet Litan Dey. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Stopping By Accident

One bus sleeping in the valley
Deep night
Rescue team works
We get down from the bus
We are not strange but silence
Can't remove eyes
Clouds are moving like a cow
Moon stuck on hills
They are covered with dew and
-poor moon light

In the narrow valley
A bed of white smoke
moving sheet
Raw cold
Rejoice my sleepy mind
I saw the sky too near to me first
I wanted that
spread over the body with array of clouds
Can touch extending hands
Time will pass in an instant
Dawn before one's eyes

My stupid heart feels the climbs
-along the hills and slipped down from the top
-just before kissing the cow
Slowly the moon diminishes
Another hill smiles having it,
Shadow of moon on hill
Rays through dark
Roaming of moon from one hill
to another ...I can't write !
But it stuck in my mind...
Silence valley
Some faded sounds
Me and my friend enjoying
-the night from a small bridge
Sorrowfulness of hills flows through the small channel
-too far from joy.

Music of water at cold deep night
-from the channel cold my heart and mind
The happiness of a moment
Still i can feel ;Again want to be in it
When i think about that special night
my all fatigue escaped
Horn of BUS always breaks the silence. 

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  1. Date: 12/13/2013 11:46:00 PM

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 12:27:00 PM
    I loved your reminiscing poem, congrats on your win Litan, well done xxx

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 11:26:00 AM
    Lots of feeling in this..a wonderful write. Congrats. Bg

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 11:24:00 AM
    Sorrowfulness of hills flows through the small channel .............what a wonderful line....congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 9:43:00 AM
    an accident turned trekking.I love reading such poems.I cherished your work.Excellent.Congratulations Litan.Thanks for the support.(: ) Jenish.

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 8:28:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your poem on nature, Congrats, Litan

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 5:14:00 PM
    Great imagery in this poem, it's almost dreamlike. Great work, Litan!

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 10/28/2013 9:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 8:57:00 AM
    well of course i fell in love with this one...i drive a bus and they can be very noisy from many different perspectives... your poem is painted so picturesque...beautiful write :)

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 10/28/2013 9:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nice to hear from you...Thanks
  1. Date: 10/27/2013 2:14:00 AM
    wow, you really put yourself there at that scene. I remember being in a bus accident traveling with our student group in Morocco country. You have a great descriptive style.

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 10/28/2013 9:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is my great and 1st live memory.Thanks
  1. Date: 10/26/2013 2:35:00 PM
    EPIC write Litan, them buses can get loud at times... glad you had enjoyment ...always a fan LINDA

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 10/28/2013 9:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your visit...I'm happy that poet like you is a fan of mine.