Stoned

Elemental dissonance Poly-plated string guess Depressive spine edge Identity description cubed Waterfalls negative score Abyssal language drops Hole numeral planification Horizontal ship oval dust Sea’s sloped gravitational Octagon growth Lack of facts and matter Undertone course kaleidoscope Particular perimeter blast Empty can tomatoes Protostar geometric syndrome Indifferent neurotransmission Necrotic wavelength voice Breakfast experience lost [Stone…stone…stone…stone…]

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Date: 11/16/2009 2:30:00 PM

Good use of imagery for a creative view. I can almost hear that "Necrotic wavelength voice." Much for the reader to think about. Like Ruben, I read this a few times. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comments. Karen

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/29/2009 4:44:00 PM

Dear Cesar, please put also a Spanish poem on soup as I kno well some members would like it. In case you could just print also the English translation. Poetry must be international, I guess. Pienso que a algunas miembros del soup le guastarán leer poemas en castellano. I have been to Wellawatte, a beach near Colombo ein Ceylon where Pablo Neruda once "caminó come embajador de Chile". Muchos saluos my amigo from Germany... Y que tengas gracias por tus comentarios! Chao, Gert

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/27/2009 10:20:00 PM

Wow, Cesar, truely stoned!!! Great experience. Do you speak Spnish too? If so could you also write a poem in Spanish? Would like to read it. And thanks for your comments....Gert

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/22/2009 4:43:00 PM

hmmm jumble it all up and make an ABC verse out of it too? Some loverly poem titles above! "Indifferent neurotransmission" great line! Light & Love

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 10/22/2009 2:30:00 PM

Wow... The title is hurting. Stanza amazing. When the world imposes a new humanitarian order following 2012's surprises... would not experience the lost person at breakfast because only purist civilization will reign blissfully. Keep writing. All the best.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/15/2009 4:28:00 PM

Wow, i need a dictionary to understand, but keep writing, I will figure it out!LOL

Jay Loveless

Date: 10/15/2009 11:30:00 AM

Hmmmmm......... idk.......is there a point to it? Always, Raiin Keetly

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/13/2009 11:09:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your splendid stoned poetry with us today Cesar. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol