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Stomping On a Rainbow

there you go, stomping on the rainbow of my heart emptying the gold Cynthia

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Robert Pettit

Date: 10/7/2012 11:01:00 PM

A fanciful poetic way of describing extortion.

Jack Horne

Date: 10/7/2012 12:04:00 PM

sad but beautiful write, my friend - Congrats on your wins : )

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 10/7/2012 6:27:00 AM

Hey! LOVE this! If you would like to see the blog where I featured your poetry (the poem was JAZZ) go to the top of this screen. There IS a search box 'hidden' in the blue logo bar (see the search UNDER the logout?) Now type in Your name then my name (cyndi macmillan) it is listed under cyndi macmillan's blogs. Hope you're enjoying your weekend. Smiles, Cyndi

Cynthia Alvez
Date: 10/7/2012 11:45:00 AM

Cyndi, thank you for the tip. Off to search now. Glad you enjoyed this poem. Cynthia

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2012 11:25:00 PM

Cynthia, I really like the message you portray here, with the metaphor of emptying the gold from the rainbow. Well done.

Cynthia Alvez
Date: 10/7/2012 11:47:00 AM

Adrea, I am always please to hear from you. Thank you so much! Cynthia