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Still Waters Run Deep

Ascended spirit, I need your help. Share with me the knowledge spoken through a voice actually mine, though it speaks kinder words of honesty and clarity that still my lucid mind.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/18/2009 12:15:00 PM

I like your Nonet. Very enlightening. Sara By the way the "Bible" is actually about a prophet named Jesus who was God's own son and Jesus said who is without sin or who hasn't done wrong cast the first stone. He was very plain in his teaching like don't try to take a splinter out of your fellowman's eye when you have a beam in your own. I love the enlightenment from the Word of God.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/8/2009 2:03:00 PM

This is the first Nonet that I have read. I will have to look it up and see what the form is about. I like what you have written. Sara

Veronica Joseph

Date: 7/8/2009 12:54:00 PM

lucid makes me think calm....well done, always listen for that guiding voice ....

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2009 4:21:00 PM

"Words of honesty and clarity" are always welcome. How beautifully you describe the spiritual impact they have on you. Very nice, Yoni. Love, Carolyn

L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/27/2009 9:09:00 PM

I love this ... what a great show of exuberant faith ... what a beautiful you.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/24/2009 2:38:00 PM

stilling my lucid mind. god within & without HUGS & I sooooooooo glad you're back. I have too much yard work lately! Light & Love

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/24/2009 5:43:00 AM

Yoni, The Spirit must be making the rounds, today. And oh, how good it is when He helps. This was a pleasant surprise after just posting similar sentiments- different style-a bit sad- Same great God - Perhaps a different name- My love goes out to you. Lovingly, Dane

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 6/24/2009 4:16:00 AM

Lucid-Love that Description