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Still Standing Still

Lost in a thought,
A mind set to jot.

To enter a trance,
No movement - a stance.

No trace of a laugh,
A blank photograph. 

Dots are connected,
A vision infected.

A stare into space,
Still standing in place. 

Making no sound,
Lost and then found. 

Six senses attack,
The world has come back. 

- Yours Truly

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  1. Date: 5/3/2013 2:20:00 AM
    - A poem that was pleasant to read - well written. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 7:21:00 PM
    Clever piece that talks of standing still but moves quickly. Well done. Welcome to the soup

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 10:13:00 PM
    I'm going to connect all your dots one of these days. :-) I'm glad you are now in your sense. I Don't want to see you fall. JOKE :-) ~*~SKAT

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 10:51:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your very unique work..Sara

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    Date: 4/23/2013 11:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sara :) ill be sure to read through some of your many poems I see you've written. - Yours Truly
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 12:34:00 PM
    hmmm.... an interesting poem, which seems to me, to speak of being dazed and confused, yet it is written so well. I do hope you write on other themes. hugs, Catie :)

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    Date: 4/23/2013 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much ms Catie :) I appreciate the encouragement and compliments. Lots of love -Yours Truly