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Sticks and Stones

By trees and water the loveseat waits For wanderers' chance meeting there The outcomes will be the choice of fates As stories repeat in spring air We left the bench shaded by flower pots fair Round the loveseat the white trilliums bloom On rocks, in swamps, each face a star They fear not storms’ nor winter’s dark gloom No weak rose, they surmount forests' scars Spring's galaxy blooms in my sweet home so far
Written February 7th for the poetry contest english quintain a spring day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/23/2012 1:28:00 PM
lovely view of spring, especially the triliums bloom. well done.
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:37:00 PM
A lovely write, Grace. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/27/2012 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/26/2012 5:24:00 PM
Uniquely beautiful poem. Congratulations, Grace! Let Spring come soon to you! iolanda
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Date: 2/26/2012 5:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "English Quintain" contest Grace. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 5:03:00 PM
A great view of spring and its charms. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2012 3:27:00 PM
a very interesting one. Unique and enjoyable. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/26/2012 1:38:00 PM
congrats Grace on a well deserved win for this breathtaking beauty of a write luv..
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Date: 2/26/2012 3:55:00 AM
Beautiful Grace Congrats xx
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Date: 2/25/2012 11:01:00 PM
congrats on your win in my contest Grace
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