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We are a living target where everything is supposed to go wrong We are suppose to be dumb make mistakes buy things for just today or get locked up or die for our struggles or adversity We weren't suppose to be where we are today running the country or even sports but you see we can make it All it takes is patience and progress to makes success don’t live for retaliation and be laid out or locked up for a decision you make Live against the odds and keep your head up because you made it today It's not a race to compete it’s a model to show that you can grow from agony. Got to keep your head up in tough times and see that after the rain the sunshine’s Don't give up cause our loss is the news gain we got to win over our situations to see through the pain and take charge on being brave. Let’s win others over and show we are so misunderstood regardless of if we came from nothing look at how we changed it for the good Stay up don’t look down because that confidence will help those struggling turn around. Stay up and strong so others can see how you handled adversity. Stay strong!

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Date: 6/27/2014 5:21:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Brandon. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. Enjoy!
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Date: 6/23/2014 5:02:00 AM
NICE POEM BRANDON! truly we need to stand strong and recover all we lost. W~elcome to poetrysoup. E~mblem of the best poetry website which gives you; l~ove that comes from richness of her words, c~ourage to harden your faith against writer's block, o~rientation toward being the best bard, m~emories about famous poems and poets. E~mbrace this lovely website BRANDON. T~his is a caring community o~f all pleasant poems and prettiest poets. P~oet is a bard known for his o~rderly composition of words to e~ncourage love and peace, t~ransparent truth and reality, r~hymes of time and beauty of nature, y~ellowjournalism and comedy. S~oup is what we dissolve our food with. O~ne who dissolve his life in poetry soup will be u~pgraded.Please BRANDON cook for the world; "p~oetrysoup"
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Date: 6/23/2014 2:27:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Brandon :) - I choose your first well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/22/2014 9:20:00 PM
Nice ending, Brandon, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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