Stay

I turn away, Don't want you to see my pain. Closing my eyes, I don't want you to go. I remember the old times, Just you and me. That's how i always want it to be. How can i keep you here? Stay with me! If you leave, I will wait, But when you get back, I will need you more then before. I love you! Please don't go!

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David Smalling

Date: 9/28/2010 6:06:00 PM

What is meaningful we always beg to keep, humble poet, your friendship your humble servant beg to keep ... to read more of what you create, in sweet simplicity

Nate D.

Date: 9/23/2010 9:14:00 PM

oi, it's hard to let go, be strong and keep cool, nathan"

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/23/2010 4:48:00 PM

Very creative and interesting write on love, Hope

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2010 4:39:00 PM

Sad to feel that one is loving one that they truly love but the other person just plays with people's hearts...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara