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Lamoureux Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 9:15 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Good morning Charmaine.
Kelley Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 6:55 AM
Not very often that I can get lost in the wonder of a piece, but I did here. Spectacular
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 7:51 AM
Well in the groove there Charmaine congratulations on your win xx
A  Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 12:25 PM
Charmaine, , enjoyed your GROOVE IT win............. ~LOVE SKAT~
A   Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 11:52 AM
Charma, it's nice seeing you enjoy the contest area.. I'm happy to see you on Nette's list... ... congratulations on your win...LINDA
Richards Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 10:13 AM
Words like "velvet" and "dark and dusty blue"........how could lines like that describe anything else but the husky voice, and a smoky room filled with jazz? Wonderful descriptive poem!!
Mehta Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 7:50 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Charmaine
Adams Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 8:24 PM
this is beautiful Charmaine....congrats on your fine win :)
Mohammed Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 11:55 PM
A dazzling piece Charmaine. Stopping by to check out your poems.
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 7:27 PM
just dropping by to say hi, Charma. Luv ya!!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 3:31 PM
Good after noon Charmaine.
Onclaud Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 9:10 AM
awaiting for your next beauty, charms..:) huggs
Onclaud Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 3:20 PM
passing by to let you know you are missed... hope we can bond in drake's next show... love and huggggs, charms!..:)
Ponce Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 10:29 AM
A very moving piece. Equal parts Sad and Hopeful just like a very good cup of coffee. :)
Situation Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 9:10 PM
Yes jazz. And poetry. Well writen.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 7:01 PM
Hi Charmaine. Two soup mails for you.
Goff Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 6:49 PM
A sweet poem, Char! Yes! I read on Drake's Show! Missed your angel voice! jimbo
Onclaud Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 5:44 PM
thank you for your comment on my page, charms... i felt so relieved and happy.. the soupy was so assuring.. how's the child caring... hope to read you more..:) huggs
Ellison Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 10:27 AM
May I add my applause for this one... absolutely beautiful! Love and big hugs xoxox
Lamoureux Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 8:11 AM
My goodness this is magical and sweet! I just love it. Straight to favorites. I have a number of your poems in my favorites now. If you have a chance I responded to some of your comments this morning.
Onclaud Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 11:53 AM
have a greeeat friday, charms!..passing through..:) huggs
Horsman Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 4:13 PM
this is so beautiful, Charmaine, and visual
Onclaud Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 10:32 AM
thanks, charms..:) SOUP MAL
Carroll Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 8:49 PM
A lovely starry romantic write.. Ken
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 6:17 PM
you did a gorgeous job, sweetie, and I would tell you to put it in the contest if you had written about smoke. But by doing it on whatever you wanted, you came up with something brilliant!!
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