Stars N Dust

stardust road gets a little dusty, down them lonesome miles to home, and the friend we gave our trust to , has become no friend of mine, but onward yet we travel, ever looking for a sign, thoughts might there unravel, till i get another rhyme, but i'm lonesome most the time, and the mirror says a crime, but its only thoughts of sadness, where is me bloody wine... re p.d. 'Stardust Road' Don Johnson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 2/2/2013 1:03:00 PM
Great rhyme and flow. Love it!
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Date: 1/7/2013 4:25:00 PM
nicely done Don ;}I'm sure Port liked it . thank you for reading my " Let Me Come Over" I just want to come over sometime,,,,, ?Happy New Year ;}
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Date: 1/7/2013 4:29:00 PM
ah well we have these secret needs, where love n passion intercedes, and heat n steam decries our deeds, just lovers in our fashion....xox
Date: 12/28/2012 2:56:00 PM
A lovely read DOn,,, love what you did here.. and now we must share wine... :-).... pd
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Date: 12/27/2012 5:15:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today..You have a way with rhyming..Sometimes dwelling on the past isn't good..If it helps one to change for the better, then yes work through it..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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