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Staring Into My Own Reflection(Inspired by Rain Cerdiwin Keetly)

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Staring Into My Own Reflection(Inspired by Rain Cerdiwin Keetly)

if you can see into the depths of my heart 
you would hear it sing the saddest song 
for those who have looked for meaning in tragedy 
for those have suffered terminally
for i have fallen just like them
i have been forsaken 
i've looked into your eyes and i see my own reflection 
i see the tears you have cried
i know you are alone and afraid 
your innocence betrayed 
but look into these eyes 
i have struggled and suffered just like you 
grab my hand you'll no longer be alone 
just think this through
for i have fallen just like you
let's stop this trend of sinking
for we are not alone
together we can break this threshold
locked in this embrace
together we will not break
bound together by something stronger than super glue
will you think this through? 
will you realize that i'm just like you? 
just look into this heart
don't let this world tear us apart
for i have suffered just like you
together we shall never fall
nothing can push our backs up against a wall
we will break through! 
believe in me! i believe in you!

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  1. Date: 11/18/2009 9:33:00 AM
    Logan....oh god....i would cut mi heart out and hand it to you...i would take your hand, and smile. your the light, im the night, but together we stand together. this is so completly beautiful. ive read it over and over and over, and it makes me cry...thank you, really thank you so much. this of the most touching and beautiful things i have ever seen. i believe in you...this one will forever stay in mi heart. xo Raiin Keetly

  1. Date: 11/17/2009 5:43:00 AM
    Thank you for starting my week out with some excellent reading Logan. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/16/2009 1:07:00 PM
    Wow that is a great poem. Lovely dedication. Lovely wording to. Keep up the awesome work. -Courtney

  1. Date: 11/16/2009 12:15:00 PM
    A good dedication for a great writter and person as well deep emotion here good jod in this write