Stardust Dreams

Not a cloud in the sky
And we weren’t feeling shy
In the back of the truck
Wishing on stars for good luck
We shared our dreams
With the moon’s beams
Cloaked by the night
Realities out of sight

Friendship shared for years
Knowing each other’s fears
Stardust blankets caught our tears
As new hope filled our ears
Time escapes all meaning
When two friends are dreaming

Debra Squyres
1/08/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 1/24/2013 3:10:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/24/2013 1:58:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 1/23/2013 7:53:00 PM
Nice to see your name among the winning Debra. Great work. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/23/2013 7:14:00 PM
Congrats on this winning poem, Debra. (^_^).
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Date: 1/23/2013 3:38:00 PM
congrats on your win Debra
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Date: 1/23/2013 12:48:00 PM
Wow! My dear poet friend, in my eyes, this is deserving of a higher placement for sure! Nevertheless, congratulations on a beautiful poem in the Winners' Circle. Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/23/2013 2:33:00 AM
Congratulations Debra you have some terrific lines in this one, 2nd verse my favorite xx
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Date: 1/22/2013 9:14:00 PM
Debra. Congratulations in Gail's "Blanket of Stardust" contest. :-). Have yourself a goodnight~LINDA
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Date: 1/12/2013 12:45:00 PM
The greatness of true friendship. You have really done it this time. Great rhymes!
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Date: 1/9/2013 3:21:00 PM
Louisiana moon beams shining sweet. Into the souls of two friends with one heart beat. A kindness hovers in the night. To let them know that all is right. New hope lives, new hope lives, when two friends know the other forgives. Keep dreamin' Debra.
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Date: 1/9/2013 10:20:00 AM
Oh, I LOVE this,,,, awesome. " stardust blankets caught our tears" You have a blessed New Years and a blessed day ;}
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Date: 1/9/2013 10:14:00 AM
I love this and will have to share with my best friend. Im sure she will enjoy it as well...thank you so much for your comment im very glad you liked the write, and it means a lot to know it moved you so.
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Date: 1/8/2013 6:19:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work! ----Lori
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Date: 1/8/2013 4:51:00 PM
This is a very beautiful and glorious write Debra! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and amazing poem this evening! What a fantastic and wonderful piece, Great Work!!
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