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Star Sugar

Oh, scattered flecks that sparkle light

like crystals emptied from a bowl

to dust the skies from some great height!

Oh, scattered flecks that sparkle light,

you sweeten up my somber night.

Delight the lone and searching soul,

oh, scattered flecks that sparkle light

like crystals emptied from a bowl.

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Line Gauthier Date: 4/13/2018 10:03:00 PM An exquisite poem and the form enhances the imagery beautifully, Andrea. Login to Reply

Carole Duet Date: 9/28/2017 4:02:00 PM This is so lovely, Andrea. It paints such a beautiful (sky)word picture in my mind and makes me like the triolet. Login to Reply

Robin Davis Date: 4/28/2014 10:37:00 PM Andrea What a very descriptive and imaginative poem that "sparkles" with creativity and charm. Thank you for the nice comment on my If I Were A Man poem. Yes, it is entered in the contest just for fun. Hugs Login to Reply

Heather Ober Date: 6/14/2013 7:12:00 AM You are an absolute master of imagery, my friend! Reading this one made my morning. I'm going to have to try this form... You are filling up my faves page! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/9/2013 10:32:00 AM Congrats on this great win about those great stars..Sara Login to Reply

Red Omara Date: 5/7/2013 10:50:00 PM Congratulations, Andrea. Another typically beautiful offering. You flatter the stars. - Red Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/7/2013 10:02:00 PM ANDREA, a nice winning poem once again.... PD Login to Reply

Jack Jordan Date: 5/7/2013 6:36:00 PM Beautiful work! Congrats on your win. Much deserved... Jack Login to Reply

Therese Bacha Date: 5/6/2013 9:38:00 PM Beautiful Andrea, loved reading it. Congratulations, see u...Love Terry xoxoxo Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 5/6/2013 7:19:00 PM You are the star on the top of the Soup!! You shine!!! Login to Reply

Abdul Malik Date: 5/6/2013 3:57:00 PM On second thought, maybe, I would say ...like crystals emptied from a Cauldron! Have to cover a very large area, you know. Login to Reply

Abdul Malik Date: 5/6/2013 3:38:00 PM "..like crystals emptied from a bowl" very imaginative! I should have written this line. Nice write. Login to Reply

Ray Dillard Date: 5/6/2013 12:21:00 PM One star-gazer to another, I love your poem. RAY Login to Reply

Painted Hunter Date: 5/6/2013 5:58:00 AM Congrats on the win, Andrea...sweet like suga'...I love it! Login to Reply

Afroze Ali Date: 5/6/2013 1:22:00 AM I like how soul and bowl rhyme. who would have thought but you...congratulations again Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 5/5/2013 11:27:00 PM Wow Andrea. You have magic powers to be able to enter so many contests and keep up on so many replies. A real beauty with this win and in first place. Kudos! Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 5/5/2013 10:21:00 PM Oh Andrea...the title alone is a great poem....congratulations Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 5/5/2013 9:14:00 PM Very nice Andrea. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Therese Bacha Date: 5/5/2013 12:02:00 PM Hello Andrea, really a very well deserved win amazing. Goes to fav. and a 7>>>>> see you later. Love Terry xoxoxoxo Login to Reply

Therese Bacha Date: 5/5/2013 12:02:00 PM Forgot the the 7>>> Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 3/7/2013 11:14:00 AM nice Andrea~Yours truly *SKAT Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 3/2/2013 8:59:00 AM Such a lovely triolet, Andrea.....this one sparkles just like your personality! Congrats!! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/1/2013 9:09:00 PM Andrea, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD Login to Reply

Charles Clive Date: 1/29/2012 3:42:00 AM Wonderful. I love it. A beautiful piece, congratulations. Charles. Login to Reply

Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 1/25/2012 8:09:00 PM A sparkling win Andrea....congrats! Login to Reply

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