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Star Steed

Writing musical notes with magical hoofs enchanted, I ride on a mystical, jet black dream steed. Proud head barely constrained by a pure white bridle and snow white reins, my pale chiffon gown, floats near his flanks speaking of innocence, flounces gathered by tiny, pink rosebuds and white gardenias. Slow motion, dreamlike, the night sky behind us like a dark, demonic power as we become starlight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/4/2021 8:56:00 PM
Dreamy poem ~
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Date: 7/7/2013 2:22:00 AM
Both stanzas were great. They really entwined and completely brought out the deep sense you craved. Very thought provoking piece. Well done on your decent quill. AO
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Date: 7/5/2013 7:47:00 AM
It almost feels like a marriage of an epiphany & serenity finally breaking free from what held it down. I could be off. But, that's what reading this felt like. Damn gorgeous!
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