Star Light Star Bright

Slowly ascending the steps towards, once upon a times 
Familiar front doors; which seem as although, but yesterday 
When her newness held such vibrancy; colours be their laughter  
Love, filling these hallways ? Leading into her many different rooms...
Some were hidden it seems; passages perhaps a vacancy sign, now posted 
Unto a curtainless window, within my heart ? Spring left melting his last 
Winter's remnants this snow, from amid it's blizzard; winds whispering about 
Silent trees flowers, bending of such their wake ? A single solitary rose; sitting atop 
An empty table; past her tomorrow's glass; aside love's note their beckoning, kiss..
Crowned time's street; leaving his bottle in champagne at that, the threshold ? 
Wrapped and this a red bow; while turning to make one's way; beyond her rainbows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/20/2013 2:32:00 PM
Very beautiful and very romantic! This would be the perfect poem for Valentine's Day. And, what girl would not receive it with open arms? Fantastic writing!...Thank you so much for your kind visit to my "Night Owl" poem. John, your company would be most welcome, seated beside Her on any moonlit night. :) Love, Kelly
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Date: 10/17/2013 10:52:00 PM
By the way, open is open readers here at Poe soup.. :) LMFAO, The more the merrier!
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Cindy Lu
Date: 10/17/2013 11:50:00 PM
Readers Digest don't pay shit Catie. It is "writers digest"
Date: 10/17/2013 10:49:00 PM
Guess what?.... I got CERTIFIED Less Than a week ago to write for Yahoo! and then I cecked my email (damn subscription lapsed) Writers Digest sent me an invitation to review my writing John, and get this!, Open Submissions until Monday. Each poem, book, article man whatever is your best(each sub. takes 25 min(for me) and they asked me for 5. I got one in yesterday, and they sent my confirmation email containing a GIFT, a free ebook thats a workbook to get organized and become a better writer.
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Johnny Rhinem
Date: 10/18/2013 7:46:00 AM
...........................¿ No, I'm Just Killing Time Here In Babylon. I Don't Need Their Hooks Nor Dreams; If You Know What I Mean ? But Good For You Girl! Run With It. Love, John *
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Cindy Lu
Date: 10/17/2013 11:55:00 PM
Actually Catie. This is all a lie. I made it all up. The 866 number is a phone sex number. Ah, I was just trying to make myself look important.
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Cindy Lu
Date: 10/17/2013 10:50:00 PM
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Date: 10/17/2013 10:41:00 PM
Hey quick message, I read this and love you lots for your careful caring and passionate revision, and the other one(poem) that you wrote was so different(hang on) I've never ever read any writer ever in my life that I have loved so much( sweetheart, you are the most romantic man I've ever encountered in my life)! Jay Delfierro said once to me that "Lucinda, when your writing takes off its going to be like a volocano erupting.. (I hear a rumble john, do you hear that! (continued)
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