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Star Clad in Eagerness

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Star Clad in Eagerness

Wishing the kiss of sunlight was the warmth of ruddy lips,
the crisp breeze, the sharp scratch, desire.. from your finger tips.
remembering, the emerald grass blades teasing my back and neck,
the heat of earth enfolding me, your wish was not suspect.

The crisp breeze, the sharp scratch, desire.. from your finger tips,
sent shivers of purple passion across my up turned hips.
The heat of earth enfolding me, your wish was not suspect,
promises faithfully taken quickly broke through false neglect.

Sent shivers of purple passion across my up turned hips
to a garden long untended, he came with marksmanship.
Promises faithfully taken, quickly broke through false neglect,
and the damn of longing’s token was broken without regret.

A tear teases eye when the sun shines buys, so much happiness.
remembering, the emerald grass blades teasing my back and neck.
Dreaming of love in the rye grass, star clad in eagerness,
wishing the kiss of sunlight was the warmth of ruddy lips.

* revisited often in my dreams

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi

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  1. Date: 10/11/2011 10:32:00 AM
    To my FAVS!Soupmail.

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 10:05:00 PM
    Congrats. Debbie on your special winning poem. Love,Vie

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 5:17:00 PM
    Congrats Debbie on a dynamic win with this outstanding poetry entry luv... incredible words to enhance the theme ...

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 12:04:00 PM
    This is so descriptive and full of emotion. Congratulations on a well deserved win Debbie

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 11:27:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning poem in Frank's "Dream" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/12/2010 7:55:00 PM
    I remember this beauty. Congratulations, Deb. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 12:24:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Deb. Nice work!

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 8:46:00 AM
    Congratulations Deb on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Pantoum Me". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/8/2010 6:16:00 PM
    Congrats on the fourth place win in my contest, Deborah

  1. Date: 8/8/2010 1:42:00 PM
    congratulations Deborah on your Pantoum love poem. These are so challenging. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/8/2010 11:10:00 AM
    Congratulations Debbie on your magnificent win in Dr. Ram's contest " Pantoum me." It is a poem full of passion and betrayal. I would like to take the opportunity to thank you for giving me first place in your contest, " Somewhere Over The Rainbow. " Thanks for your encouragement and inspiration. Sometime I am unable to comment on your wonderful poems, and when I do...I see your gems dazzling in front of me! Have a blessed day and may your inspiration never end. Love and hugs, Andrew.

  1. Date: 8/8/2010 7:23:00 AM
    Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in the Pantoum Me contest with this entertaining and exquisite write ..enjoy another super dupeer win TEACH ..way to go..this happy Sunday.. luv..pupil..

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 7:17:00 AM
    Glad to see I've quickened some pulses? ;)

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 6:21:00 AM
    So well donethis Pantoum, Deborah! It is like a painting in words. And thank you for your comment on Summer Meadows....Gert

  1. Date: 5/10/2010 4:16:00 PM
    Un HU it on the 7th of May .. look down below for my comment... well good luck in Catie's contest with this one too.. they are both excellent ..your words are exquisite in both too...luv.. pupil..

  1. Date: 5/10/2010 1:45:00 PM
    Faithfully we all dance to natures knock's spring ! Yet even in the crystal frozen dust, with one uncover, again her hips, again my trusting lust ! Great write here Deborah ! TY for sharing it with me ! james

  1. Date: 5/7/2010 2:49:00 PM
    Well now I need a cold shower .. ahh just got back from the beach is all.. could not be your Pantoum could it??? .. great and good luck TEACH... like a tall willowy tree sweeping down over the lovers... Wow Wow Wow... where's my towel??? luv.. pupil...

  1. Date: 5/6/2010 9:37:00 PM
    this is very sensual, Deborah. I love all those lines of the first stanza and L2 in stanza 2. Then the final stanza, really great ending! I know you are gonna do really well! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 5/6/2010 5:49:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest. seems to be a winner

  1. Date: 5/6/2010 5:30:00 PM
    Mercy me, Cher!...One of your very best efforts for sure...I remember reading your comment on a recent blog that said some of our best poetry comes from pain, suffering and lost love, etc. (and that ain't SUPPOSED to come easy)...I agree! - Tim