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Standing Alone

a flock of white geese almost touching the rainbow on their busy wings takes a little bit of me and fades in the horizon =============000============

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Poet. Undertaker

Date: 6/19/2013 12:24:00 AM

good poem. no words to praise

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 6/19/2013 12:24:00 AM

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/24/2013 10:24:00 AM

Just beautiful! I sense a great deal of freedom and awe in this picture as the geese come into your view... then so soon fly away.

Betty Bolden

Date: 2/20/2013 7:11:00 AM

wonderful write

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2013 11:54:00 PM

Just saying hi again!! I am getting SO behind on my comments. Grrrrr.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/20/2013 9:03:00 AM

beautiful imagery and contrast here, kash-- shucks, sad to say, my answer to your question is also enn oh :(

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2013 2:12:00 PM

Just here to say HELLO, my friend!

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/5/2013 11:05:00 AM

Ahh....so beautiful and serene, and rather sad as well. Loved it. Many thanks once again, Kash.........I reviewed Deb's theme, you gave me a chance to try again. Thank you as always! :)

Jack Horne

Date: 1/2/2013 1:20:00 PM

love this tanka, Kash : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/31/2012 2:33:00 PM

hey Kash, didn't I see one above the poem for my contest the other day? Did you remove it? or am I imagining something that didn't happen? well, I bet it's around New year day for you already. FIREWORKS for you!!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/27/2012 9:20:00 PM

what a beauty.I joined the journey!Happy new year to you and yours my good friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2012 8:06:00 PM

waiting and waiting for a new one. You are enjoying your December a little too much!!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/27/2012 6:33:00 AM

a breathtaking sight Kash in this lovely write.. my hubby has me on half hour limits since my ordeal at hospital..so happy to read u again and thankxx for your luv .. wishing u a blessed NY ..

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/26/2012 3:05:00 PM

this is amazing Kash...

Sean Goodwin

Date: 12/26/2012 1:00:00 PM

Lovely image you have painted. Such an awesome tanka. -- Sean

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 12/24/2012 10:10:00 PM

You have created almost a beautiful painting on the canvas of sky. Great write my friend and congrats for your grand win and thank you for your comments on my latest poem. Season’s greetings and Best Wishes Kash…Ravindra K

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/24/2012 11:04:00 AM

Excellent and wonder filled scene that you have painted...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..May the joys of the season be may for you and your family this year..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2012 5:32:00 AM

Good morning, Kash,, A nice warm congratulations for the very nice win in Rick's "Any 5 Line Poem" Wishing you the best holidays to come. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Love~LINDA

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/23/2012 1:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning spot Kash xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/23/2012 6:42:00 AM

Good poem, Kash !! A little Christmas visit to you. <3 Hope your Christmas will be peaceful and beautiful!! Sending you a big, warm Christmas hug. - MERRY CHRISTMAS - //Anne-Lise :)

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 12/22/2012 7:55:00 PM

awesome,,,, this is a real lovely Poem..thank you dear Kash ...enjoyed so very much....<3<3<3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2012 5:32:00 PM

dang, I would have liked to see this one further up the list. It is so good, kashinath. How are you , my sweet friend? are you busy or being lazy?? well, congrats on the winners' list.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/22/2012 3:26:00 PM

Sheer beauty, Kashi...unimaginable beauty. If I am sitting on a park bench in front of the pond, I too can see them touching the very same rainbow! Congrats friend...Gwendolen

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 12/22/2012 2:18:00 PM

Nice piece,Kash...Wonderful images and beautiful view...Congrats on your win......

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/22/2012 1:40:00 PM

Well done Kash! Have a great Christmas.