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Spyders and Lust

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Spyders and Lust

You say you want me... but you know me not.
You think i’m sweet and delicate
Like i’ve never fought? 
Gentle as a razor, supple like a dream.....
 I’d let you get close and watch you as I sting.

Its only in my nature, I only want to love
But when your tossed away it makes you think before you jump.
To feel your hands upon my hips, the sweat across your face
I’d love you to death, if you didnt run away!

copyright 10-28-12

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  1. Date: 10/28/2012 7:56:00 PM
    I love the way you have developed this poem and ended it. I especially enjoyed the forth line "Gentle as a razor............" The only poem of mine even remotely similar is "Fatal Attraction" A very biting poem you have here.