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Spyders and Lust

You say you want me... but you know me not. You think i’m sweet and delicate Like i’ve never fought? Gentle as a razor, supple like a dream..... I’d let you get close and watch you as I sting. Its only in my nature, I only want to love But when your tossed away it makes you think before you jump. To feel your hands upon my hips, the sweat across your face I’d love you to death, if you didnt run away! andreatravis copyright 10-28-12

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Date: 5/26/2015 12:06:00 PM
captivating
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Date: 5/24/2015 11:17:00 PM
ANDREA, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 10/28/2012 7:56:00 PM
I love the way you have developed this poem and ended it. I especially enjoyed the forth line "Gentle as a razor............" The only poem of mine even remotely similar is "Fatal Attraction" A very biting poem you have here.
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