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Spyders and Lust

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Below is the poem entitled Spyders and Lust which was written by poet ANDREA TRAVIS. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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Spyders and Lust

You say you want me... but you know me not.
You think i’m sweet and delicate
Like i’ve never fought? 
Gentle as a razor, supple like a dream.....
 I’d let you get close and watch you as I sting.

Its only in my nature, I only want to love
But when your tossed away it makes you think before you jump.
To feel your hands upon my hips, the sweat across your face
I’d love you to death, if you didnt run away!

copyright 10-28-12

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  1. Date: 5/27/2015 12:02:00 PM
    Hi ANDREA.. Just a quick note to congratulate you for having this impressive write featured on Soup's home page for the whole world to easily see.. Well, at least many poetry lovers will get to check it out. Blessings and keep writing wonderful works! -LM

  1. Date: 5/26/2015 12:06:00 PM

  1. Date: 5/24/2015 11:17:00 PM
    ANDREA, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 7:56:00 PM
    I love the way you have developed this poem and ended it. I especially enjoyed the forth line "Gentle as a razor............" The only poem of mine even remotely similar is "Fatal Attraction" A very biting poem you have here.