Spring's Sweet Reality

She wanders to a dream, a place Where weeping willows brush her face Beneath the branches bending low She's walking where a garden grows Grass gently sways, as cool as glass And timid blows the warming breeze, That fetches shining hair with ease With wisps of gold, which fly astray, Like meadow flowers, in yellow maize A melody of larks, that sing Of promised spring....of pastel things An amber sun, a basking glow, Who ambles by and whispers low Of meadows green and rainbows too How much she longs to bask again To warm a face so pale of skin But then, once more the threat of chill Upon a cheek, a breath of ice And snowflakes land upon on her lash They startle cold, like morning ash, A northern wind that stings her eyes A thief will snatch her scarf away, And thus her dream has gone astray And once again her dream has died Yet distantly, there lies in wait, A springtime place, a promised fate A path beneath the willow tree, Where sun peeks through the velvet haze Where flowers bloom and meadows grow, And larks sing lovely lullabies The earth will wake, to be a dream A dream with sweet reality
____________________________________________________________ For Francine's Contest: "Winter Begone" 1/23/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 2/4/2013 1:23:00 PM
So dreamy Carrie..I felt like I was on the walk with you. Thanks so much for stopping by my writes and always being..YOU. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/4/2013 10:20:00 AM
Congratuations, Carrie! Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/4/2013 8:53:00 AM
Wonderful!
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Date: 2/4/2013 8:08:00 AM
Well done Carrie a super write and well deserved place xx
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Date: 2/4/2013 7:29:00 AM
A dream of a poem...lovely and congrats. BG
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Date: 2/4/2013 1:45:00 AM
This is exceptionally lovely Carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2013 1:32:00 AM
Big Congrats on all your beautiful wins Carrie!!! WooHoo!! Well Done!! Love ya,deb
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Date: 2/3/2013 11:13:00 PM
Congratulation on your well deserved win. Warm, Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/3/2013 11:10:00 PM
congratulations on your winning write..
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Date: 2/3/2013 10:05:00 PM
many congrats on your winning entry Carrie
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Date: 2/3/2013 9:56:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations with your wonderful poem ~ Always~ LINDA
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Date: 1/23/2013 6:00:00 PM
Wow and Wow again !! You took me there with such ease...this is just so beautiful !! So awaiting the touches of spring in the air ...we are being teased now with warmer weather, for that I've been thankful.
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