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Spring Talk

Don't  push me down
with all your might
I may recoil and hit you back












Sept. 25, 2012

educationlifesenryu

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/7/2013 9:56:00 AM

Amazing vibes... This is rich in my book. Congrats Leonara~A.O

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/5/2013 5:59:00 PM

Hi Sweet Leo,,, that was a nice try... But, I like this senryu.. I laughed my butt off, reading this one once again...I gave you an HM,, just for trying out my contest, and making me laugh... LOL... love you always~ LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/5/2012 2:17:00 PM

hi sis-ie.... here is a tune for you...Butterfly in the sky I can go twice as high Take a look It's in a book A Reading Rainbow I can go anywhere Friends to know And ways to grow A Reading Rainbow I can be anything Take a look It's in a book A Reading Rainbow A Reading Rainbow

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/29/2012 12:14:00 PM

My first wife was a Libra, a very gentle soul Love and hugs, Jack xox

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/28/2012 9:56:00 PM

I love being a Libra... It's finally nice to know another female Libra, every Libra I know, are males.. :-( LOL... pd

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/28/2012 9:54:00 PM

Hi Leonora, I was thinking about your birthday as well.. I have something special for you.. I do not want to get the date wrong, is it October 4th or 5th... I have an x -boyfriend who's birthday is October 8th... So i mixed all the days in my head.. Please . let me know before you log off... PLEASE..... xox~pd

David Scott

Date: 9/27/2012 12:01:00 PM

I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL ON THAT ONE MATE WHEN I WROTE TEN IT WAS INSPIERD BY THE OLD SAYING TEN NINE EIGHT ETC COOL IN YOUR FACE POEM XX DAVIDSCOTT

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/27/2012 11:56:00 AM

very nice Senyu..I like it my friend Nore...I will experiment next time :) Good day!!

Jack Horne

Date: 9/26/2012 2:10:00 PM

lol, good for you, my friend - don't let anyone mess with you. Congrats on your wins : )

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/26/2012 8:11:00 AM

I thought of a season and something different popped up. I see some spunk in these lines that says you're nobody to fool with. I like this :) Love Lizzie

Len Gasun

Date: 9/26/2012 6:21:00 AM

Thank you so much my dearest friends on the soup for liking this poem of mine. May I explain further why I've chosen this theme. Sometimes, I think I am a person who is like a spring but, a spring who only reacts when I’ve already counted 'til 4-5 that means, too much compression starts to hurt. LOL. i love you all!!!! muahhh...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/25/2012 9:05:00 PM

A very powerful senryu Leonora. I can relate. Outstanding!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/25/2012 8:39:00 PM

Yes bouncing back at every hit is the right way to react... love your senryu... hope Susan loves it tooooooooo,,, Leonora, standing up to every push down action is the way I like to take life in the face... ha ha..you hit it with a good one... love it...always~pd

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/5/2013 5:59:00 PM