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Spring Showers

I loved a walk in the rain Early one morning When no one was about I felt refreshed Invigorated Ready for the day ahead And I loved a walk in the rain Late that same night No one was around I felt relaxed Unwound Ready for a restful night For Russell’s Spring Showers contest, 1st April 2013

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/21/2013 5:24:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Donna Jones

Date: 4/17/2013 6:09:00 PM

Congrats Jack.....

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/17/2013 10:29:00 AM

Relaxed and refreshed...neat idea..congrats. BG

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/17/2013 9:38:00 AM

Congrats on yourt win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/17/2013 8:31:00 AM

Jack, Congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Spring Shower" contest. Nothing lovelier than the fresh felling of spring approaching. *Always & Forever~LINDA

Seren Roberts

Date: 4/17/2013 2:32:00 AM

congrats Jack, well done my friend...Seren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/11/2013 4:56:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..We are going to experience so rain and possible weather tonight so it seems now..Thanks for stopping by..Princess is beside me again rest from sleeping all afternoon..Ha!!Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 4/8/2013 11:45:00 AM

A refreshing read jack.Very nice.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/2/2013 7:59:00 PM

This is very nice,,, there were spring showers here over the weekend, and thunder and lighting. I was think how I love the smell of rain ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2013 3:30:00 PM

another short but sweet entry. I enjoyed your poems today and I always hope to see you posting more and more, Jack.

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/1/2013 11:50:00 AM

There's nothing more refreshing than a quiet walk after a spring rain, Jack..so true! Enjoyed!! My best wishes for the contest, my friend. Always, Annalise

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/1/2013 10:12:00 AM

A refreshing rain ..... and a good night. - Good luck in the contest Jack! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)