Spring Showers

I loved a walk in the rain
Early one morning
When no one was about
I felt refreshed
Invigorated
Ready for the day ahead

And I loved a walk in the rain
Late that same night
No one was around
I felt relaxed
Unwound
Ready for a restful night  

For Russell’s Spring Showers contest, 1st April 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/21/2013 5:24:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/17/2013 6:09:00 PM
Congrats Jack.....
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Date: 4/17/2013 10:29:00 AM
Relaxed and refreshed...neat idea..congrats. BG
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Date: 4/17/2013 9:38:00 AM
Congrats on yourt win.
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Date: 4/17/2013 8:31:00 AM
Jack, Congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Spring Shower" contest. Nothing lovelier than the fresh felling of spring approaching. *Always & Forever~LINDA
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Date: 4/17/2013 2:32:00 AM
congrats Jack, well done my friend...Seren
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Date: 4/11/2013 4:56:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..We are going to experience so rain and possible weather tonight so it seems now..Thanks for stopping by..Princess is beside me again rest from sleeping all afternoon..Ha!!Sara
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Date: 4/8/2013 11:45:00 AM
A refreshing read jack.Very nice.
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Date: 4/2/2013 7:59:00 PM
This is very nice,,, there were spring showers here over the weekend, and thunder and lighting. I was think how I love the smell of rain ;}
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Date: 4/1/2013 3:30:00 PM
another short but sweet entry. I enjoyed your poems today and I always hope to see you posting more and more, Jack.
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Date: 4/1/2013 11:50:00 AM
There's nothing more refreshing than a quiet walk after a spring rain, Jack..so true! Enjoyed!! My best wishes for the contest, my friend. Always, Annalise
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Date: 4/1/2013 10:12:00 AM
A refreshing rain ..... and a good night. - Good luck in the contest Jack! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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