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Spring Rain

Morn, child-like, in scented spell of spring rain falling slow, charming from coal clouds on high. First soft shower, shapes senses, drowning pain. Fresh mix of earth, air, and leaves linger nigh ‘til May raindrops rest like tears from my eye. Nature’s sweet breath redolent of rebirth traces time in blossoms and musky earth. Dawn's spirited fling quenched by misty spring; Drawn to the dance of fragrant rain in mirth as billowing sky folds into soft rings. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 11/13/13 for Nette Onclaud's FRAGRANCE OF RAIN

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Date: 11/25/2013 10:06:00 PM
So beautifully described, Rhonda! Your poem was a refreshing one to read! Amazing work! Congratulations on your well deserved win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!
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Date: 11/23/2013 4:12:00 PM
Excellent winning work..Congrats on your place of honor..Sara
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Date: 11/20/2013 5:02:00 PM
very nice dizain Rhona congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/19/2013 9:39:00 PM
Rhonda,, Congratulations on your beautiful FRAGRANCE OF RAIN poem... Hugs ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/19/2013 8:39:00 PM
wow, this is a gorgeous gem. Just when I thought i had seen already many beautiful poems about rain, yours is equal to the ones on the top!! Congrats on the winners list, sweetie.
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Date: 11/13/2013 8:59:00 PM
Wow, this is a tremendous entry into the contest my friend! I am thoroughly impressed by the awesomeness of this amazing poem this evening Rhonda! I really enjoyed reading this wonderful piece! What a glorious poem, Great Work!!
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