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Spread My Wings

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Spread My Wings

Faith has been broken
Tears must be cried 
If only I walked away
Sooner then later 
Did you shake me up
Or did I just bring you down

Can we make each other happy
Will we brake each other down
Did we both jump into the fire
And not even care what came  

One of these days  
I'll spread my wings 
And fly away from you
Then we both can be happy

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  1. Date: 2/10/2013 10:17:00 AM

  1. Date: 6/11/2011 9:21:00 PM
    this was a very creative piece you wrote, and i would have thought it really happen to you, that is how real it was, i give it a ten, but we can only go up to 7. you do have a gift so don't ever stop writing. thank you for commenting on Bring on Summer. Summer vacation was something i looked forward to every year, as even kids today do also, each summer brigns on a new memory.

  1. Date: 5/5/2011 6:22:00 PM
    Trust me on this one Debbie: Run....It's not worth the pain if someone makes you feel this way. R.M.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 5/11/2011 1:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This is made up out of my head,, if I had a relationship like this I would run;} I'm single ,,,,,,,,,,;} thank you for reading it ;}