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Spiritual Struggle

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Spiritual Struggle

"Spiritual Struggle" Part One - Visit to Hell fiery flames tantalized torment screams of horror choked inside throat demons danced inviting souls gripped into fear and fright pitchforks pierced sweet flesh no mercy shown dark dungeon devil feasts ... Part Two - Salvation from Heaven saved prayers heard miracle God is Greater most powerful Being loves me with all my flaws enfolds me in His safe arms grace has rescued a wanton heart love is stronger than essence of Death ... *For P.D.'s To Hell and Back Contest ... *Written by: Linda-Marie The "Sweetheart" of P.S. ...

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  1. Date: 3/13/2014 2:10:00 AM
    I know this struggle very well ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 1:16:00 PM
    Amazing write Linda and congratulations, regarding the nightingale poem, check your spelling of nightingale, maybe I am wrong?? and line 5 needs a space, otherwise gosh is it beautiful. Love Constance

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 1:12:00 AM
    WON 1st place ... thankxxx..

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 11:10:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "To Hell And Back" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 8:34:00 PM
    Well done, congratulations on your first place. Lee

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 1:57:00 PM
    This is lovely Linda! I love the way you approached this title. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 1:18:00 PM
    Linda-Marie congrats on your win, love it...hope your health is improving..David

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 10:45:00 AM
    This is a wonderful entry in the contest Linda. I could cry, I feel God,s mercy so much in it. Congrat's on your 1st place win. You deserved it.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 12:03:00 AM
    Congrats on your wonderful win Linda Marie.

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 8:24:00 PM
    HI... LINDA, MY BFF FOR LIFE... I was impressed by your entry.... thank you.... and many hugs of CONGRATULATIONS~ xox~ PD

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 3:53:00 PM
    a very CLEAR and vivid contrast of good and evil, or rather the places we can end up!! I sure hope hell is not really this way. (I can only hope. haha. I'm such a little devil)

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 12:51:00 PM
    good luck! i love how everything flows together

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 10:08:00 AM
    Beautiful lines,I love how easy you make writing look~Perfect...Thanks for your recent comment ~

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 3:59:00 PM
    What a wonderful way to approach this contest Linda-Marie! I hate to tell you this but you are missing a line in your Visit to Hell Nonet! The 5 syllable line is missing! I noticed you had only eight lines in the first nonet and thought something was missing! It was the 5 syllable line! I hope you don't mind me telling you this! I just wanted you to have a good shot at this contest! This is a very incredible write as it is my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fabulous poem! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 3:02:00 PM
    I love how you did this. A wonderful write, a sure winner! :) Tanya

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 1:28:00 PM
    love this beautiful write, my friend - PD will love it, for sure. Hope you're all well and enjoying the sun and beach. It's hot here too at the moment

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 11:16:00 AM
    Very expressive work..Reads like top of the winners' list material..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by my blog..I hope your day is good...God is there and all we have to do is acknowledge him and ask for forgiveness...So simple isn't it..Sara

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 10:38:00 AM
    beautifully penned entry, good luck in the contest Linda Marie

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 10:35:00 AM
    Dark and hot in hell, heaven is beautiful and safe.....Wish you luck in contest - Glad you feel well Linda-Marie. - oxox love from me to you.

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 9:46:00 AM
    An awesome write here Linda!I love the way you ended it in a very positive uplifting way.Best wishes to you.