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Special Wish

The golden days have passed, But the sweet memories remain, Today I think of them, As it is a special day again. On your birthday, dearest brother, I wish to tell you, Something – that’s very true, You are my first child, who made me a mother! We have always been together, In school and everywhere, We have done ‘n’ number of things, Dancing, playing and fighting, There existed a competition between us, I know sometimes I created a fuss! You won always, In cards and video games. ‘Guess what?’ was our favourite, You always tried to answer it right. When in our cousins you outstood, I felt so very proud. I admit I was strict, While teaching you I would shout, But my motto was to bring, the best out. The times you ask, “ Didi, give me money”, Believe me I feel so rich, when I have any. Something that hurts you, Gives me pain too. My love for you will always grow, Though sometimes I may not show, Remember brother, my anger is my care, I pray to Lord to give you the happiness of my share.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/20/2011 6:48:00 AM
I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and excellent piece Nilofar. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/20/2011 3:41:00 AM
The use of mother-son relationship to define sister-brothers' is an intelligent one! I also like the line"my anger is my care".Best wishes for you and your brother ! :)
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