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Speared Ice

Snow sprinkles rooftops

melts into water.

Water runs its path

to the edge of the roof,

water drips,

forms a line of ice spears.

The water stops dripping,

for now it is frozen.

Icicles dangle from rooftops,

threatening to fall,


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  1. Date: 3/4/2011 10:40:00 AM
    You have made me shiver and it's unusual for New Orleans......Thank you...

  1. Date: 1/6/2011 9:38:00 AM
    You have described our recent snowfall on the east coast of the US quite well with these relatively few words.

  1. Date: 12/15/2010 7:26:00 PM
    very descriptive you brougt alive a picture so well..sunkan