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Speak Up

Either from constricted throat or hesitated poise, I find that creepy silence a deafening noise! Like bees it buzzes in the core of my frazzled mind Speak up, my dear, if you can be so kind! See, like a red red rose withering to gray, I find myself fading day after day Left out to wonder what your mind may do, I blush like a virgin nun, but tingle blue If eyes only had a big, fat mouth We’d be married with children and a fine, nice house But love, eyes can only do so much! If I feel mine water, I will hide it with a punch! For cat’s sake—snap out of this frustrating state! Look alive, help us both feel great! I promise if I wither like that tearful rose I will spray you with my not-so-silent hose!

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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 2:00:00 AM
    I love the bitting wit in this poem. Well done.

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 8:58:00 PM
    Haahahahaha...Sorry for the chuckle. I found this a bit funny. :o) Very entertaining as always.

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:33:00 PM
    I like the hopeful hostility in this piece Laura - its a good thing my eyes have no mouths otherwise I'd get into even more trouble than I already do - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 8:32:00 AM
    awesome, love the theme, and the message this poem gives out....

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 5:37:00 AM
    Yes....speak up, my dear... if you can be so kind.... A very well written poem Laura, thanks. Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 8:04:00 PM
    Aw I like this one... very nice and great words. As usual it is amazingsauce....just like you...and all your shtuffs haha. anyway, awesome! Always, Becca