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“You are just a sparrow Honey Chile “
“I’m not” she said to him
“You sort of sometimes drive me wild”
She said “it is no sin”
“So shut up Chook I’m gonna talk”
He clamps her beak so thin
She squeaks an something, squawks
And then  she does him in

Don Johnson

For Francines competition 2nd

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  1. Date: 5/26/2011 2:01:00 PM
    Congratulations, Don... perfect .. nice lesson... take care p.d...

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 11:41:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest Don. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 8:30:00 AM
    Love this chirpy conversation ..and how he calls her 'chook', that's so sweet, and clamping her thin beak...wonderful interpretation..Congrats on your super win Don...Awesome!!

  1. Date: 5/11/2011 1:59:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 5/11/2011 7:43:00 AM
    So cute!!! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 5/11/2011 5:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Don

  1. Date: 5/11/2011 5:21:00 AM
    great poem and big win Don. wonderful. A hearty congrats to you!

  1. Date: 5/10/2011 10:01:00 PM
    A great 2nd place win, many congratulations x

  1. Date: 5/10/2011 9:02:00 PM
    She DID him in..great line. congrats on your big win. BG

  1. Date: 5/10/2011 8:16:00 PM
    Congrats DON on your super big win in Francine's contest for this dynamic entry luv.. so happy to be sharing this winners list with u luv.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch poem luv.

  1. Date: 5/10/2011 8:07:00 PM
    Very good. Congrats

    Date: 5/10/2011 9:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Samual something new for me almost winning thanks mate Don
  1. Date: 5/10/2011 7:55:00 PM
    Congratulations on your big win, Don! Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/10/2011 7:43:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Jivey language and fun rhyme. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/10/2011 7:35:00 PM
    congrats Don on your second place win in my contest, the last line had me laughing out loud

    Date: 5/10/2011 9:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Francine you made my day no other love does come this way 4 you i'd paddle in the river styx with me wrists n ankles strapped to bricks! thanks babe Don ps been babysittin an old rhymer last 2 days gettin his 82 year old Halliwell eye fixed for not been online mucho
  1. Date: 5/4/2011 7:25:00 AM
    very nicely done.. cory

  1. Date: 5/4/2011 5:45:00 AM
    A *winner* for sure. ....and your poem's a bit more than can be seen, eh?