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sparkling beauty

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sparkling beauty

putting turf 
upon the fire
dancing flames
a sparkling jewel
holds inner vision
wearing the crown
soul touching soul
in warm thought

floating into 
the deepest ocean
petal soft
satin feelings
to give you 
a white rose 
kissed with
colour of beauty

white washed emotions
colour spiced feelings
floating butterflies 
dancing on breath
whispering breeze
beneath the surface
taking air 
in one breath

upon the ocean
rising waves
fall to your feet
floating touching souls
softly petals
like snowfall
melt within
ebbing around emotions
in your heart

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  1. Date: 10/20/2013 5:30:00 AM
    Lovely work of art Liam. Enjoyed perusing this one.

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 11:21:00 AM
    Very nice poem....certainly takes me to a peaceful place and gives me feelings of love and gratitude! Well done, Liam!!!!!!! :-)

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 7:32:00 AM
    This is a true sparking beauty:) color spiced feelings, white washed emotions, Wow, Liam! its such a pleasure reading your work.

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 2:49:00 AM
    This is a picture of euphoria. Nicely done

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 2:11:00 AM
    oh, so very sweetly written, I liked this one, Liam, well written...peter

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 6:24:00 PM
    This is a sparkling beauty of a poem. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 5:20:00 PM
    A pleasant read on a fall eve. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 5:05:00 PM
    A dazzling and sparkling poem Liam..Just soo beautiful!!!