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I thought I could have kept you forever 
But forever seemed a bit to be to long 
To forget you might seem to be clever 
But for that I not at all strong 
Not having you with me 
Leaves my heart with an utter tear 
Right now I'll cry you a sea 
With hope you will still be here 
Death isn't a choice 
Life is no longer a pleasure 
Loud will be my voice 
With sorrows the ocean can't measure 
My heart is counting the moments till I see you again 
I scream and shout without a stutter 
At nights I wail in utter most pain 
My love for you is all but scatter 
You name is across my heart 
Love carved it with a knife 
I love you Sparkie is how is start 
In death you are still part of my life

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  1. Date: 1/20/2013 5:32:00 PM
    Nice featured poem~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:36:00 AM
    Naveah Rassan, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself a lovely Sunday.... always & forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 11:54:00 AM
    Hi Shivonne welcome to the soup, loved this very gut wrenching write, look forward to reading more, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 7:54:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Shivonne. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 12:12:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.a good write

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 9:05:00 PM
    Passionate write thank you for joining our soup hope you make friends here, vie

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 8:16:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup. Thank you for sharing your words...John