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Spaces and cold dead faces

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Spaces and cold dead faces

Empty rifts in space
I see your cold smiling face a useless reflection I've lost your connection
our hearts that once beat in sync has drifted your pulse getting softer as I breathe in your scent.

Your hand slipping and all I can do is watch your beauty fade
if I could I'd reach inside suck the poison out make everything ok but as my last memory fades all I can see is empty space but your silhouette always remains

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 1:15:00 PM
    Sad, but nice... Terry

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:12:00 AM
    - A sad poem here, Jamie .... - But again well written, like it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)