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Sounds of Seasons

Ruffling of feathers Birds mating in the morning Unlocking the Spring Cicadas singing A midsummer symphony Honoring the sun Geese in formation The squawking "V" heading south Leading arctic fronts Hibernating bear Sleeps to sounds of December Locking down Winter ____________________________________________________ Inspired by the choka contest sponsored by Raul Moreno

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/11/2009 6:12:00 AM

The form accommodates well the imagery and deft poignancy of your words.

James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 12:57:00 PM

Beautiful poem Abe, locking all the seasons in one poem>>James

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/20/2009 1:00:00 PM

Abe - Congratulations on placing in Raul’s, “The Sounds of Nature Contest” God Bless, MJ

Sandra Hudson

Date: 5/15/2009 3:01:00 PM

The four seasons in choka style, very clever Abe, congratulations!-AA

Corinne Curcio

Date: 5/15/2009 10:07:00 AM

Well done Abe - Not easy to do all the seasons in one little poem! Congrats on your win

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/15/2009 9:12:00 AM

A beautiful poem as I said before. Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest. Smiles from Lolita

Brian Strand

Date: 5/15/2009 8:31:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Abe Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/15/2009 6:16:00 AM

A wonderful winning poem, Abe!! Congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest! Great job! ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/15/2009 5:47:00 AM

YAY Abe!!! Warmest congrats on your win in Raul's contest! Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/15/2009 2:11:00 AM

Abe, congrats for placing in my contest...Raul

Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 4/21/2009 12:14:00 PM

I don't know why but i like the word fidelity and lemme tell ya Choka is yo specialty

Darleen Bilyeu

Date: 4/21/2009 11:00:00 AM

lovely write Mr. L!!! you always have creative writing!!!

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/21/2009 6:04:00 AM

So beautiful. Choka is your line.

Charlene Bird

Date: 4/20/2009 9:18:00 PM

Simply magical writing here capturing the beauty of all seasons, very well written! Thanks you for the wonderful comments and acknowledgement on my work! Charlene

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/20/2009 9:14:00 AM

Abe, each one alone a masterpiece of nature! Awesome writing! Good Luck! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/20/2009 7:10:00 AM

Excellent, serene and a winning poem! Good luck Abe!!! Love, Carrie

Laurie Ginn

Date: 4/20/2009 3:47:00 AM

The last line especially gets your attention. I hope you do well in the contest, you and the squawking "V"

Brian Strand

Date: 4/20/2009 2:50:00 AM

Best wishes with this one Abe.& thank you for your welcome blog comments.

Judy Riley

Date: 4/19/2009 9:57:00 PM

I will look up "Choka", I am still learing alot of the types of poetry, This is a nice combination of Haikus that paint a wonderful image of Spring, and animals sleeping. Good work. Judy Riley

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/19/2009 9:02:00 PM

Thanks for supporting my contest Abe...Raul