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Sounds and Nuances of Blue

Blue washes over me sometimes and will not let me go. Melancholy soon becomes the ROAR of frothing ocean waves, toppling me into navy blue. Frustration too arrives, sometimes in the form of gulls screaming in my mind! That is when I’m sinking sinking sinking into deep dark blue. Other times, however, blue is light - an airy powder and nearly tranquil except for the occasional whoosh of a gentle breeze. I love to hear its aqua lapping lapping lapping softly at my feet while I lie in warm white sand beneath a cloudless expanse of azure sky. Blue is often glad - winging its way through fields and trees singing notes from throats of happiness’ birds or raising heads of periwinkle flowers to beautify spring and summer days. Blue nearly fades away completely in the fall but reappears at times as splendid sapphire sunsets melding into cardinal, amber or rose and utterly silent - like the stars that glisten in the indigo of night. Once in a blue moon I might see on snow a rare glow. It beckons me to venture out into winter’s beauty like a brand new lover enticingly ice blue so many sounds and nuances of blue! but the one I always love giggles like a child I want to slide into a sexy sports car - shining baby blue and glide away Vroom Vroom Vroom 11/2/2013 Entered 1/28/23 For Mark Toney's 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 26 Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/1/2020 10:53:00 AM
I am a lover of blue; so much of what I love about nature is blue - the sky, the blueberries on the vine, the lake, the peacock breast, the ocean, the blue jay and bluebird. When I was in my teens I dreamed about owning a blue sports car (a Camaro). Love all your seasonal twists in this and all the blue aspects of life you enjoy. And yet we describe our sadness as "a case of the blues". Strange indeed! Quirky fact: you posted this on the 50th anniversary of JFK being shot.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/1/2020 2:38:00 PM
hey I HAD the blue Camaro. It was the most beautiful car I ever owned!! I had no idea I posted it on JFK's death anniversary!
Date: 8/10/2015 6:26:00 PM
ANDREA, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 8/10/2015 3:19:00 PM
Awesome use of metaphors !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/10/2015 3:04:00 PM
Great write and win Andrea...Congrats
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Date: 8/10/2015 1:34:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Andrea! Superb amazing!
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Date: 8/9/2015 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/21/2014 8:31:00 AM
Congratulations on this top spot win Andrea...so much deserved....
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Date: 2/15/2014 8:37:00 AM
Stellar blue hues! I love it Andrea, congratulations.
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Date: 2/14/2014 3:59:00 PM
Andrea, this is beautifully written so many words, shades moods of blue. Congratulations on your win.Huberta
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Date: 2/14/2014 2:20:00 AM
I love to read this once again my dearest friend Andrea! Excellent poem and form for all splendid blue colors. Thank u so much for sharing again and my big hearty congratulations on your great win! Biggest hugs & cheers! I'll b back to read more. Sorry for coming late. So busy @ schl & just arrived from 3-day Eng. Camp. I'm stopping by also to greet u & your family a very Happy Valentines Day! Wish u all the best of love! TYSM for ur kindness, love & everything! More blessings! Miss & love u m,Leo
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Date: 2/13/2014 7:34:00 AM
So much blue and in all its splendor! Nice poem and I also love how you formatted it! Congrats on a great win! hugs..
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Date: 2/13/2014 3:21:00 AM
Bright sky blue :-) Congratulations to you.
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Date: 2/13/2014 3:08:00 AM
Great one that merits first place; congrats Andrea.
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Date: 2/13/2014 2:21:00 AM
Awesome Andrea! Congrats on first place win !!
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Date: 2/12/2014 4:40:00 AM
I forgot there were so many things you could stick blue to, well done Andy xx
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Date: 2/11/2014 7:13:00 PM
Beautiful... I like the stanza also. Verlena
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Date: 2/11/2014 4:44:00 PM
A victory, Indeed !!! And you say you don't write free verse easily.....I beg to differ!! Blue scores!!
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Date: 2/11/2014 4:23:00 PM
Congrats on your victory my poetic friend..Frederic
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Date: 2/11/2014 4:18:00 PM
you finally made the climb, andrea, I told you you were inching up there! haha here you have combined two of my favourite things: free verse and colour, and I love this personification of blue, I really FELT those different shades of blue...there are very few instances where use of a cliche is permissible, but this is one of them - "once in a blue moon" fits in perfectly, and I also like the internal rhyme going on: snow/glow - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Date: 12/12/2013 7:49:00 PM
I like how you covered different shades of blue and your format adds personality to the poem. Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 12/12/2013 11:44:00 AM
Way to go with winning blue..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/11/2013 7:16:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea, You pulled me right into this one....Hugs...Roger
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Date: 12/11/2013 8:35:00 AM
wow, nice win Andrea. ..hugs. .Linda
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Date: 12/11/2013 7:36:00 AM
congrats on a fine win Andrea
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Date: 12/10/2013 9:49:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Andrea
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