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soul's whisper

i stand beneath the moon
and attempt to admire its beauty;
its as full as my mind
with thoughts of you
i feel the breath of wind
a tender, welcomed touch
against my almost bare flesh
it arouses me
as shadows touch
like lips reaching
towards that first kiss
the gleam of a thousand stars
become your eyes
reflecting back at me

passion’s flame ignites
i can hear its thunder 
loud, like a summer's storm 
your inner soul shines 
like lightning across the sky 
i arch my back 
and cherish the warmth
as the wind caresses me 
and feel the rain of affection 
pouring down on me 
soothing me 
i am refreshed 
as i marvel in the beauty
of our relationship 
love full bloom

yet i struggle
like the moon
between clouds
yearning to understand
the abomination
of others
and scorn their darkness
with the beauty of your light

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  1. Date: 9/18/2013 8:46:00 PM
    You have your own radiance here, and it shines through loud and clear, have a great evening , xxx

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 4:21:00 AM
    Wow what an enchanting read with powerful use of language!

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 9:29:00 AM
    A great combination of quiet words expressed with such clarity and emotion. Simply gorgeous.

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 6:59:00 AM
    Sandra--very cool. This is a pleasure to read because the image is a lot of fun. The idea of a full moon and full mind is very appealing to me. Shall we say it tickles my brain? Thank you for your kind comment the other day. Very kind!

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 3:37:00 PM
    You`re an amazing poet dear Sandra.Andrea`s right: straight into my fav list it goes!! Have a super duper weekend my Souper Hugs~Arild

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 8:34:00 AM
    this is lovely Sandra, you truly are a wonderful poet!!!!!

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 4:47:00 PM
    wow, a FAVE!!!!

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 1:44:00 PM
    Wooow Sandra, it is beautifully !!!!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 9:28:00 PM
    Absolutely stunning work! Quite enjoyed this! Thanks for lookin at my shtuufs ^^ Always, laura

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 1:01:00 PM
    Sandra, wow.... some whisper.... xox~pd