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Why is this happeing? What happened to me? Where is the feeling? What worst is, where is the craving? You were my ambitions I was so beaver to chase you I was gonna give you everything But now its all just gone Gone with the wind Wind which have no direction Where was it? I like that feeling The craving that i have for you Why is just gone now? Why now? Why when I feel something more from you I have no temper left for you? Where is that temper? I need to have it back Its the only thing that can make me feel as human Make me feel fragile Make me feel lost in your world Make me feel alive in this world Make me have a goal in live In my meaningless life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 3/30/2012 10:27:00 AM
Well done and welcome to P-Soup. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/25/2012 6:19:00 PM
thanks everyone for the comment. :)
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Date: 3/23/2012 6:44:00 PM
very nice poem. enjoyed reading it tonight
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Date: 3/23/2012 5:00:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Novriska. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2012 3:38:00 AM
Such a common sentiment among poets, very well expressed. Your theme is well developed. i enjoyed reading this, so thanks for sharing.
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