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Sorrow Hurts

how can i fly? with broken wings how can i roar? my wildest dreams how can i reach? the top of the world how can i say? those lovely words how can i sing? if there is no tune how can i be happy? if you cause my life of doom how can i feel safe? if i'm full of fears how can i cry? if there is no tears

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Date: 7/26/2012 12:22:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Alycia. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2012 3:27:00 AM
I love this Alycia - especially how you've used rhetorical questions to build up on the theme. And the title is definitely very appropriate to the whole poem. Very nice!
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