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Sorrow For a Stranger

He sits down, alone, in a cheap, plastic booth at a fast-food joint, and leans his cane against the table. His right leg appears boneless, just a loose appendage hanging from his hip socke, that he has to drag around. He eats his hamburger that he ordered off of the dollar menu, and moves on to his kid-sized chocolate milkshake. As he gets down to the last few sips, he struggles to keep the cup still on the table. He shakily lifts up his right arm so that he can hold the cup with one hand and guide the straw with the other, but like his leg, his right arm is limp and lifeless, rendering his hand useless. Sorrow begins to claw at my open heart, eroding any emotional strength that may have existed before. I am overwhelmed at the sight of this fragile old man, sitting alone in a fast-food joint, struggling to make his body cooperate. I can feel tears crawling into my eyes and trying to escape down my cheek. Even though he might be perfectly content in his life, I feel this desire to help him, and tell him he's not alone, and that the aching pangs of loneliness are familiar to me too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/11/2011 10:01:00 AM
This is just great. The fine description really brings it to life, so that I feel I am there too.
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Date: 8/17/2011 3:15:00 PM
This made my eyes get all watery once again.I had to come back and read it again.
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Date: 8/15/2011 12:47:00 PM
This really speaks to me....I just helped out at a food pantry locally and it is sad to know that so many people are in need. Some were homeless.
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Date: 8/12/2011 4:43:00 PM
I like your thought process through out... Nice work my friend.. Michael
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Date: 8/11/2011 9:04:00 PM
I liked it.I kinda got lost in the.....I struggle to help myself area. Thats all :-) I think it's great!
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Katie Telling
Date: 8/11/2011 9:11:00 PM
thanks for the feedback Dan! I was thinking about taking that last part out, it doesn't really flow with the poem!

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