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Song In the Dark

~ There are legends I've heard, old songs in the dark of the old folklore tales, and the old gypsy trails, where traveling caravans of rugged old wagons still echo, with longing, in valleys below... Where each treasured belonging, was packed in a hurry all the stories, all the worry, all the heartache would travel all the sunshine, and the sorrow, celebrations to marvel and dreams of tomorrow, were kept on the road.... The trail was a friend, and the loam was their home Their needs were quite small, They didn't expect, to be wealthy or rich. All the riches they had, were scarce and so few...but they knew that happiness could be the sun on your back, or a sky, wide and blue... Not much to expect, and not even respect... would be theirs to be owned. As the twilight would come, under a red setting sun, with the fragrance of loam, and the tired walk done... they would bed under trees where the heather was strewn they would burn a small fire, and prepare a warm meal, with smoke in the breeze, while the whippoorwill's song and accordion tunes, would drift by the face of the moon On their heels was the dust, in the noontime sun They rose with the dawn, and the gold of the past, wearing the colorful hope of tomorrow's new task Working wherever a meal, and dollar would come Then moving again with their band until dusk over, and over and over again... Some called them tramps, or small petty thieves But the heart of the matter, was the love of the sun, the love of the life that came from the moon, from the stars, and the grass, and the rust of the leaves For those who encountered, and who gave them a chance could learn many things by watching them dance, and learn many things by hearing them sing, and pay close attention to how much they knew that fortune is something that comes from inside It comes with the pride, of knowing what matters The tattered, lost life of the old gypsy tribes .... might be the saddest of stories, or loneliest song... a song that has faded, that has dwindled and died.... _______________________________________ 5/18/12 101 in a ROW contest - 12 Sponsored by PD

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Date: 9/12/2016 8:35:00 AM
Like the romantic notion of the gypsy life. A well expressed piece. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/9/2016 11:33:00 AM
Those poor, disappearing Gypsy tribes -- and, they were so good at reversing the curse of lycanthopy. ;-) Congrats on your win....
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Date: 9/8/2016 10:58:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "Tonight I will Write" and enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/21/2014 7:58:00 PM
Such a rich, sad & long history, I think there still are Traveler's in the UK & EU? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/21/2014 7:17:00 PM
I remember when they came through and Daddy let them bed down on our land. I thought they must have a wonderful life. Well done as always Carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/21/2014 3:05:00 PM
Congrats Carrie. Loved this poem with its imagery taking us back through time. // paul
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Date: 3/21/2014 1:52:00 PM
I'm far from gypsy at heart, but, can feel and see the picture you paint with this effort, Congratulations, RAY
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Date: 3/21/2014 11:40:00 AM
you give darkness a new meaning, carrie... a deep write!.. sweet congrats!,, huggs
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Date: 3/21/2014 10:56:00 AM
Hi Carrie, I was quite carried away with thoughts of olden times you evoked in your excellent portrayal. Congrats on your win. Regards Theresa xx
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Date: 3/21/2014 6:33:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read the poem you consider your favorite and best. Congratulations on the win, carrie
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Date: 2/14/2014 7:51:00 PM
This is almost a forgotten era. Your poem brings it back to life. There was a kind of mystery, a touch of class and a freedom in those tribes that few will ever know. Guess if I can't look at Norman Rockwell, I can read your poetry and get the same effect.
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Date: 9/25/2013 4:32:00 PM
Wow! I really enjoyed the story you told here. I loved the rhymes, and the imagery was also amazing. This was a great entry for the "epic" contest. Congratulations on your win, as well! Excellent work, Carrie!...Thank you for the nice comments, once again!
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Date: 9/25/2013 6:25:00 AM
- I looked into the past winners list .. where I found this .... a second place!! - Well deserved!! - CONGRATULATIONS, CARRIE !!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/25/2013 4:27:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 9/24/2013 7:20:00 PM
since I first started reading this, the song "gypsy's, Tramps and Thieves" has been playing in my head...you tell this tale beautifully in your unique poetic style...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/24/2013 5:19:00 PM
true romany gypsy's are wonderful people with great honor you do them proud congrats on win in epic contest Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/24/2013 4:52:00 PM
Nice win Carrie.......Congrats................. Love~SKAT~
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Date: 9/24/2013 12:03:00 PM
Beautiful. Congrats on the win. I particularly liked the line: 'As the twilight would come, under a red setting sun, with the fragrance of loam, and the tired walk done...' - just lovely imagery here. Well done. Shane
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Date: 9/24/2013 11:32:00 AM
Carrie, , :)Congratulations!!! Thanks for supporting my EPIC contest with this amazing deep imagery. Exactly what I was looking for. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""In The Stars"" OR my latest blog! " Wartime Memories " at -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15948&PoetID=18720 always & forever **LINDA
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Date: 5/28/2012 4:08:00 PM
I really enjoyed yours. I love how you included nature and their love of sun and moon. How you very easily got the other words into it: tramps and theives. sure wish I'd thought of that. Congrats!
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Date: 5/24/2012 11:42:00 PM
congrats on your fascinating win, carrie.:) huggs!
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Date: 5/24/2012 6:58:00 PM
Carrie, another wonderful win,, Congratulations in, Lisa's contest. It's been sweet reading many of the winners out here this week.. Take care~ PD
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Date: 5/24/2012 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations on another well deserved win Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2012 1:48:00 AM
Carrie congrats on your well deserved win..David
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Date: 5/22/2012 11:05:00 AM
carrie. What an amaizing poem. I became an instant fan of this poem. I actual added it to my fav, poems and poets. Such talent so reach wow. You blew me away with this one.
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